Monument ([info]marnanel) wrote,
@ 2009-07-05 13:20:00
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Entry tags:firinel, gran canaria, poetry

Thirst
Written for Fin, because I miss zir very much.

My health needs are few,
but water comes first.
I tell you, it's true.
My health needs are few,
And water is you.
I'm aching with thirst.
My health needs are few
but water comes first.



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[info]firinel
2009-07-05 08:17 pm UTC (link)
Aww, that is lovely, thank you. I love you. <3

Edited at 2009-07-05 08:17 pm UTC

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[info]floatyfish
2009-07-06 07:24 pm UTC (link)
This is lovely.

I love this specific type of poem that you write for Fin and how so much can be said within such simple lines.

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